Sunday, February 18, 2007

How can I revise this letter?

Hi,

Thank you so much for your kind help.
I received the documents yesterday.
The director of international office is going to complete the Visa clearance form and send it to XXX University on the first week of May.
I will be out of States for the summer. (or I'm leaving the States? can I just use "the States" instead of "United States?")
I would greatly appreciate it if you could possibly send the I-20 that is notified by xxx University to Korea.

Sincerely,
000

Answer on How can I revise this letter?

Hello,

Thank you so much for your kind help.
I received the documents yesterday.
The director of the international office is going to complete the Visa clearance form and send it to XXX University the first week of May.
I will be abroad for the summer.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could send the I-20 to Korea after it has been completed by xxx University..

Sincerely,
000